Writing

Writing Task 2 — Responding to a Survey

The opinion task: 26 minutes, 150–200 words. Pick ONE option and defend it with reasons and examples. Includes CLB 7, 9 and 11 sample answers.

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Key strategies
  • 1.State your choice in the very first sentence. Indecision reads as weak — commit immediately.
  • 2.Give TWO clear reasons, and back each one with a specific detail or example. Reasons without examples stay shallow.
  • 3.Briefly acknowledge the other option, then explain why yours still wins. This shows balanced thinking.
  • 4.Use linking words to guide the reader: Firstly, Furthermore, On the other hand, For this reason.
  • 5.You do NOT need email format here — a short essay with a mini-introduction and conclusion is ideal.
  • 6.Keep it 150–200 words and leave 4–5 minutes to proofread tense, articles and plurals.

What this task tests

CELPIP Writing Task 2 gives you 26 minutes to write 150–200 words. You read a short survey describing a situation with two options, and you must choose one and explain why it is the better choice. Unlike Task 1, this is not an email — it is a short opinion piece.

The scenario usually frames it as: "Your [city / company / building] is considering [Option A] or [Option B]. Which do you prefer? Explain your choice."

A structure that always works

  1. State your choice — one clear sentence: "I believe Option A is the better choice."
  2. Reason 1 + example — your strongest reason, supported by a concrete detail.
  3. Reason 2 + example — a second, different reason, also supported.
  4. Concession — acknowledge the other option, then explain why yours is still better.
  5. Conclusion — one sentence restating your position.

Why "reason + example" is the key

Test-takers who only list reasons ("It is cheaper. It is faster.") stay at a low band. The jump in score comes from developing each reason:

"Choosing the community garden would be cheaper. For example, the city already owns the land, so the only real cost would be soil and seeds — far less than building a new parking lot."

That bolded sentence is what moves you up a level: it proves the reason instead of just asserting it.

Common mistakes that cost CLB points

  • Sitting on the fence — discussing both sides equally without committing.
  • Listing reasons without examples — keeps the answer shallow.
  • No concession — a one-sided answer feels less mature than one that addresses the opposing view.
  • Over-running the word count — every extra sentence is another chance to make an error.

Sample answers by CLB level

See what each band looks like — and what lifts an answer to the next level.

CLB 7 — Solid, clear
Prompt

Your city has money to improve one public space. The options are: (A) build a new playground for children, or (B) plant a community garden. Which option do you support? Give reasons.

Model answer
I think the city should build a new playground for children.

First, there are many young families in our area, but there are very few safe places for children to play. A new playground would give them a place to be active and make friends. This is good for their health.

Second, a playground is used by many people every day. Parents can meet other parents there, so it helps the whole community feel closer.

A community garden is also a nice idea, and some people would enjoy it. However, I think fewer people would use a garden than a playground. For this reason, the playground is the better choice.

In conclusion, the city should build the playground because it helps children and brings families together.
Why this is CLB 7: Clear position, two reasons, a short concession, and a conclusion. Sentences are simple and correct. A reliable CLB 7.
CLB 9 — Developed, natural
Prompt

Your city has money to improve one public space. The options are: (A) build a new playground for children, or (B) plant a community garden. Which option do you support? Give reasons.

Model answer
In my opinion, the city should invest the money in a new children's playground.

Firstly, our neighbourhood has a growing number of young families but almost nowhere safe for children to play. A modern playground would give them somewhere to be active outdoors, which matters at a time when so many kids spend their afternoons in front of screens.

Furthermore, a playground naturally brings people together. While their children play, parents strike up conversations and form friendships, strengthening the sense of community on our street.

A community garden certainly has its appeal, and I understand why some residents would prefer it. However, a garden tends to attract a small, dedicated group, whereas a playground serves dozens of families every single day.

For these reasons, I am confident that a playground would benefit the greatest number of residents and is the wiser investment.
Why this is CLB 9: Reasons are genuinely developed (screens, friendships), the concession is gracious, and linking words guide the reader. Vocabulary is varied and natural.
CLB 11 — Polished, persuasive
Prompt

Your city has money to improve one public space. The options are: (A) build a new playground for children, or (B) plant a community garden. Which option do you support? Give reasons.

Model answer
If the city has funds for a single public space, I would direct them toward a new children's playground without hesitation.

My first reason is reach. Our neighbourhood has seen a wave of young families move in, yet there is virtually nowhere safe for their children to play. A well-designed playground would draw dozens of families daily, offering kids an active alternative to the screens that increasingly dominate their free time.

Just as importantly, a playground quietly builds community. As children play, parents fall into easy conversation, and those small exchanges are precisely how neighbours become friends.

I can see the charm of a community garden, and for a handful of dedicated gardeners it would be rewarding. Realistically, though, its appeal is narrow, while a playground delivers value to a far broader cross-section of residents.

Weighing breadth of benefit against cost, the playground is, to my mind, the clearly wiser choice.
Why this is CLB 11: Sophisticated framing ("My first reason is reach"), idiomatic phrasing ("fall into easy conversation", "cross-section of residents"), and a confident, weighed conclusion. Controlled, varied syntax throughout.

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